I shall find your heart,
unmelted
and
unfrozen,
at the bottom of
the blast furnace
or in some corner
of a vast wasteland.
but
what is essential here
is invisible to the eye.
my heart
still has its vision
as acts of love
remain ....
unnoticed......
Author notes
well...i saw the signs but ...what can i say..
do you think that the spacing of the words helps or hinders the poem?
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This was awesome. The presentation was a "full smack in the face". It was a little hard reading because of the background but then I noticed your comment regarding that.
Great job.
Soulful Woman
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on the waste
thank you so much for your comment..and persevering through the background..will definely fix it... -
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i like your site
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how prettyful ^-^
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a "blast" from the past..will i ever learn?
thanks for your comment
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i think i may need to apologise for the font being not bold enough..i was trying to get a background that would resemble the "blast furnace"..haven't had time to edit the font..i will though..promise..
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