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Waltz of the Tree

The Autumn leaf sways
Her heart fills with woe and awe
The beuaty within

Tree lies with contemp
So she may feel whole again
With grace and good will
Peace and forgiveness for all
The tree dances wild

The Autumn leaf sways
I would long to be that tree
So lucky, not me

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Opens with a Haiku, then a Tanka, and then another Haiku.

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  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    July 22, 2008

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    interesting mix of forms yet still as a whole getting the analogy across and keeping true to the format...
    Cyber Artist


  • raggyann
    March 30, 2008
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    very different
    and well done


  • Namita
    October 1, 2007

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    Wonderful form. Enjoyeable write, with imagery that is not limited when a form is tried. Thank you for entering.

    ~Candy

  • Virgoan
    September 16, 2007
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    Love the form and the words. Great write

    Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    VIRGOAN