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Wings of Bronze

Wings of bronze,
Head of white,
Flying strong into the night.
Glistening moon,
And stars above,
Shining down with a touch of love.
Broad and brave,
The eagle flies,
Looking over with his eyes.
How far he'll go,
To catch his prey,
We'll never know, to our dismay.
His wings so strong,
To get him through,
Are shields of protection and love too.
So with wings of bronze,
And head of white,
We watch you fly into the night.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 27, 2008

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    Wonderful flow and just a breathtaking thought. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • fantasysmurf
    January 13, 2008

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    Talented

    Well-deserved win. Do keep up the writing. I felt free as a bird in the sky reading this. Have you heard the song 'Learning To Fly' by Pink Floyd? This song is also able to make me feel like an eagle soaring


  • Melodies
    September 25, 2007

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    Making me smile, especially!

    Dear Sir Poet, I am carrying this magnificent nature poem away to Poetry Planet, where it will be held in a place of honor and hundreds of people will read it and LOVE it! Thank you VERY MUCH!


  • Ruby Petal
    September 21, 2007
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    Oh wow!

    I really love this poem. <3 Great rhyming and imagery. XD
    And yes, I started up AP again. *shock horror*


  • myorama
    September 19, 2007
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    Lovely flow and imagery. Thanks for entering.


  • raggyann
    September 16, 2007
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    very nicely done

  • Seaquince
    September 16, 2007
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    wow

    i am impressed.. this I would call a worthy piece of writing that gives life to the picture


  • ennovy silver member
    September 16, 2007

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    This is a very vivid picture you gave with your colorful words. Nicely written and beautiful imagery........novy

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