Wings of bronze,
Head of white,
Flying strong into the night.
Glistening moon,
And stars above,
Shining down with a touch of love.
Broad and brave,
The eagle flies,
Looking over with his eyes.
How far he'll go,
To catch his prey,
We'll never know, to our dismay.
His wings so strong,
To get him through,
Are shields of protection and love too.
So with wings of bronze,
And head of white,
We watch you fly into the night.
A contest entry
- Power in the sky - Fly eagle Fly - Picture inspired by myorama.
850 points, ended October 4, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into gold (or silver or bronze) #6 by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended September 27, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful flow and just a breathtaking thought. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Talented
Well-deserved win. Do keep up the writing. I felt free as a bird in the sky reading this. Have you heard the song 'Learning To Fly' by Pink Floyd? This song is also able to make me feel like an eagle soaring
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Making me smile, especially!
Dear Sir Poet, I am carrying this magnificent nature poem away to Poetry Planet, where it will be held in a place of honor and hundreds of people will read it and LOVE it!
Thank you VERY MUCH!


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Oh wow!
I really love this poem. <3 Great rhyming and imagery. XD
And yes, I started up AP again. *shock horror* -
Lovely flow and imagery. Thanks for entering.

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very nicely done


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wow
i am impressed.. this I would call a worthy piece of writing that gives life to the picture -
This is a very vivid picture you gave with your colorful words. Nicely written and beautiful imagery........novy

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