My past and future collide,
Leaving me full of Confusion,
Accident of life,
I paid the price,
No Insurance from this pain,
Wreaked by emotion,
In debt to the present,
Cascaded by this thing,
Standing on this corner,
Alone and in fault,
Badgered by feeling,
Questioned about the wreak,
Colliding in a blunt color,
Flashing grief inters me,
Licensed to this Curse,
Found guilty by decision,
Nothing is my something,
Turned inside out,
My mind has left me,
Dead in this reek
Author notes
Option 6
A contest entry
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650 points, ended September 17, 2007, 43 entries
Honorable mention
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Wow, this was a very different poem, but different is good and I think you really showed (by the style you've written this) that you 'own' this piece.. you have a unique style!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for commenting on this poem. I am glad you enjoyed it. I defiently try to write with my own style. I love to be unique. Thank you so much. Glad you liked this.
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Thank you for the honorable mention.
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Your very welcome
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