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a Love Story

I knew it was too good to be true
When I first laid eyes on you
You said my face was a work of art
And I knew a love story was about to start

I remember when you said
We we'll be together until death
Then you took my heart and ripped it to shreds
Now I know how a love story ends

You stole my heart
And tore it apart
You took both pieces
Why can't I have a piece of yours?

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MellyD

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  • daddyspwincess
    September 16, 2007

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    Reading this poem i felt the guy was a jackass and that you deserve someone better. Good poem, keep on writing!