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A Brumous Morning

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This brumous morning with its whispering leaves,

That sigh goodbye to summer's last adieu,

Then dance in spiraled gold across the lawn,

That mirrors heaven's stars in crystal dew.

 

A flick of bushy tail there on the bough,

As squirrel searches for last nuts to hide

Amongst the falling leaves and twisted roots,

Where horned and humble beetles now abide.

 

The somber storm clouds billow and reform

A warning of this fickle autumn's moods,

As on horizon's line the crimson glow

Confirms that something in the heaven broods.

 

A breeze disturds the glistning spider's web

That showers the hawthorn with its crystal shine,

And in deep shadows of the glowing wood,

A sprinkling of brine, cut logs define.

 

Mist rises slowly to the pallid sun,

Reflecting rainbow hues of red and gold,

And on the canvas of the season's change,

A wondrous transformation I behold.

 

Now autumn woos me in her russet gown 

And from the summer takes her golden crown. 

 

 

 

 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    "The somber storm clouds billow and reform
    A warning of this fickle autumn's moods,
    As on horizon's line the crimson glow
    Confirms that something in the heaven broods."

    Sighhh...Ohhh, Di...this is an exquisite penning, Lady...You earned the gold, my Friend...pure & simple. Gorgeous rhyme, impeccable imagery...& what a lovely picture, as well. Be proud, Sweetie...This is a beautiful piece that I know Nicolette will love. Congratulations. Wanda


  • Namita
    October 1, 2007

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    This is just marvellous! The rhyme is just flawless... and imagery... is breathtaking! A fantastic write of breathless beauty.

    ~Candy

  • Virgoan
    September 16, 2007

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    The verses are indeed marvelous! As always, you manage you instill imagery at its finest moment.

    Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest my friend.

    VIRGOAN


  • suseann
    September 16, 2007

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    That image above is fantastic. But can't compete with the autumnal visions you've painted so well in exquisite verse.Absolutly beautiful poem.

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    September 16, 2007

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    Refreshing

    Beautifully vivid yet softly from one season into the next. This is soooooo lovely. Good luck in the contest, pretty one.

    Lady D


  • Room without doors gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Outstanding

    I enjoyed the fluid flow of this poem and the detailed imagery that speaks of autumns colours and intensity. A well crafted poem with a subtle blend of language and metaphors. Best of luck in the contest.

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