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cricketjeff (A Clerihew)

Cricketjeff the halfarsed poet
Had talent and knew how to show it
Loved a lady or two or their "arse" in his time
But not quite as much as he loved to write rhyme

Author notes

cricketjeff asked me if I had ever written a clerihew... and I hadn't. So after some brief research, I figured why not write one about him?

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  • lonely-loser-girl
    November 19, 2007
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    lol!

    very good ... made me smile
    ~*BRE*~


  • wiccanway
    September 25, 2007

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    interesting, not familiar with the form but this at least shows the comical stylings I have come to expect from you. and what does cricketjeff think of this?


  • Katilina
    September 17, 2007

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    Hey I feel the same way as good ole Jeff. This little diddy is a lyrical thrill. It is nice to have fun! Reminds me of one of my poems I need to post. Maybe tweek the third line a bit. The imagery is a little unclear. ROCK ON!


  • allfivehorizons
    September 17, 2007

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    heheheh... so amusing!!! i absolutely love your poems. they're just so witty.. looking forward to the next one!


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Cool! Never heard of a Clerihew! It is sort of like a limerick but with not the same syllable count. I must look this form up. Pam


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Now you've got me looking it up as well.
    A nice little rhyme...well done...Sue


  • raggyann
    September 16, 2007
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    this was a little cute one
    i liked it

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