I have split the atom
And dumped the decay
Released it's dedication
Along the way
It was baggage too much
To carry there
It was weight for a soul
That doesn't care
But that's not to say
That I care less
Just that I do it
Now in fairness
I let it be
No more than it is
Do not attach
To another's business
And least of all
Shall I attach to thought
The pointless morality
Of an is to an ought
Not anymore
The point it is blunt
And all eternity
Just a moment
Yet lasting forever
It fills my day
So free of the baggage
That fell by the way
A cool wind blows
It's red at night
The shepherd says
It'll be alright
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is thought provoking.
My first impression is that you might have ment the baggage of what should be your own thoughts and those of other peoples. Emotionally I find this very well wtitten about life in general. This is not awkward nor should it be changed. The title is very good and the firat line makes you wonder what comes next The last line is perfect. I liked all of this. A well written piece.
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