In secret world of silky webs
lies iron strength,
spanning hearts and minds
like forest trunks of all kinds
connected by less than a whisper
we pass on messages
and reason to weave
faith that it makes a difference.
*for Nicolette
Author notes
Nicolette is oen of the most inspired, sharp, writers on AP. I agree, but she is more...she is that spider weaving to hold us in knowledge that the world is a beautiful place.
http://allpoetry.com/Nicolette
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A contest entry
- PIF Contest ~ Simplicity by Namita.
300 points, ended October 1, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nicolette deserves all that you gave her... it's so beautiful Carol. Nicolette is a wonderful poetess and a person, I'm glad for what you gifted her... so much of emotion adn love.
Luv,
~Candy
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yw and ty candy.
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I love the thread of silken words. Wonderful as always my friend.
Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest.
VIRGOAN
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ty for commenting, my friend.
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You couldn't write bad poetry if you had to! I swear, if someone held a gun to your head and told you you'd die if you didn't, you'd probably write your own eulogy and it would stand among the greatest ever penned. Heh. This is such a simple string of words but, threaded by your hand they fall together so very well.
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aw, ty pen friend... I wonder..you know, I have spent quite a bit of time in Sr's homes and I have seen old women talking away to things and of things of the past ...wanna bet I am speaking poetry? LOL! Probably more real than I know.
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testimonials not roasts
bring love down to toast
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Webs are an intricate and beautiful connection of magnificant proportions yet so simple. Your poem is amazing, as is all your poetry!!! As a child I was completely entralled with spider webs and still am to this day. My son shares the same fascination. Best of luck in the contest my dear. God bless you.
Hugs and love,
Petratani xo
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then, an elder of mine would say...you are busy spinning stories and creating.....
good morning pen friend.
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Such a beautiful understanding of how we share and care! Nic will love this heartfelt message of allegiance to a true Soul Sister! loyalty and devotion pour from the page...
"we pass on messages
and reason to weave
faith that it makes a difference."
Wonderful Weave of Words, M'Lady.
~ Nicky♥
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ty nicky... I ahve spun msyelf out of a funk, as well.... to write an hnor poem for friends is soething I value.... it is a way to conenct to them in a new and different way...
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Such a beautiful weaving of silken cohesion...leaving words to dangle like precious bubbles as shere to travel time forever...
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and you are master of that, my friend. good morning.
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"faith that it makes a difference"
Carol...and with this you've weaved a web of arms around me across time and sand. Yes... you've made a difference, my friend...So beautiful this is. And yes, it really is a beautiful world where the generosity of hearts is expressed and felt like this.
Thank you for your eyes that see and understand, my sister of the soul...
~ Nicolette
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as I said in earlier comment.... thee is an intimate connection when one writes a poem for a friend.... it goes to a higher plane to gather dear thoughts of that person.
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"connected by less than a whisper
we pass on messages
and reason to weave
faith that it makes a difference."
You are both weavers of the highest caliber, my beloved Sisters of Soul. This seems to be a piece of "simplicity", but ahhh, the meanings & layers that I can see within. Beautifully done, Sweetie. Nic will love it. Good luck in the contest, my Friend. Wanda
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we are allw eavers of words, thoughts, emotions, life.... and my, I have enjoyed both your webs and Nicolette's.
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