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Darkness Of Desire

Within
my dreams
a shadowy
figure appears

 

falling into his arms
I breathe in
the passion
of his sin

 

our bodies shape
in tightly form
desire spreads
while fingers tease

 

Closing my eyes
I begin
to sway to his
seductive charm

 

upon my moistened lips
he places his
raptured by the moment
I welcome him deep within

 

squirming
subservient
sultry lust fills the night

thunder roars

as souls colide

 

 

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  • CherryOnTop
    October 30, 2007
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    Passionate and graceful.


  • scoobygal
    October 26, 2007
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    Very Nice

    I can so relate to this.. Your words are written with such clarity and vision... I like it.


  • michael thomas
    October 12, 2007
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    It is nice that you open your poem for us to see a very private moment.


  • penman gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    Excellent

    What you have written in amazing. Truly seductive.


  • Endeavor gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    Excellent


    upon my moistened lips
    he places his
    raptured by the moment
    I welcome him deep within

    Very powerfull words

    I hope you find the voice
    to meake this complete

    Rick




  • Shakes-spear
    September 16, 2007
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    just as the love we feel

    Our lives, just like this poem are forever under construiction. We must work on them from time to time so the foundation remains strong. If not life and love can become stagnant. This is rather steamy and not something a brother should read(but I like it). You are and have always been the best, The Shaker


  • NyteShade
    September 16, 2007
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    well i like what you have done with this so far. well done.

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