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Whole Worm Holes

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Unexpected Elegy


The fading pall is lifting in the East, -
black bird of night’s departing epiderm, -
surprise – the tables turn – who makes a feast
upon the early bird ? – The early worm...

The Worm

Dawn: – I sperm
on grass, ground.
Stem to stern
bound I’m found.

Vile erme worm
underground,
silent squirm
‘neath firm mound.

Slimy derm
rings me round,
while I turn
earth, - no sound.

But I churn
while men fiddle, -
‘tis the kern
of my riddle...
 

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  • ellipsist
    September 23, 2007

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    kind of humorous, to me

    the connection made a rather brilliant one and I do enjoy the metaphor and the sexualization of the piece... I liked the feel to it... it kind of made me feel dirty... in a good way - a good thing in this case... effective!


  • islekine
    September 16, 2007
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    Write on!

    lol...good luck in the contest!
    *PEACE*

  • Trafalger679Curious silver member
    September 16, 2007

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    Excellant/imaginative/fun

    A cool and humorous write, indeed. Well done. For some reason reminds me of this silly old line: Ooey Gooey, was a worm. A little worm was he. "One day he sat upon a railroad track; a train he did not see. Ooey, Gooey!!"