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just a flying visit..

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You say your glass is full Wee Sis
And that’s a statement true
It’s full of crème de menthe you see
And it’s green, so you won’t feel blue

So while you sip away at it
Let me introduce myself
I’ll start by saying a little bit
While you relax and settle yourself

Now firstly let me tell you this
I got a message from up high
An angel passed a note to me
Said ‘your needed’ was her cry

So I spoke to her a minute
To see what I could do
And found I had a calling
I knew exactly what to do

So I walked the path towards you
With a smile and outstretched hand
And hugged a good old country gal
From good old Dixie land

Now surprised was not the word I’d use
When I gazed at what I seen
For all around her family
Was a land of evergreen

Now the message got was simple
A big brother she does seek
So I had to get a move on
Couldn’t wait another week

So I stepped into my shiny shoes
Put my best foot forward too
And started walking Cullman way
So I could meet with you

Now how to ask who I looked for
Was something I needn’t fear?
See your initials are the same you see
Our connection is so clear

So I found where I was looking
And standing there so proud
Was a family I should be part of?
Standing tall amongst the crowd

I am proud to meet you Sister
And I’ll make you proud of me
And that’s not just a promise
It’s ‘my word’, just wait and see

I will honour you like brothers do
Protect you from the storm
And be your rock to cling to
If anything goes wrong

Yes I’ll shower you with flowers
On your birthday, you will see
The nicest big old brother
You will have if you pick me

So Michelle I stand before you
What you see is what you’ll get
A brother you can talk to
Let these words in stone be set

Please allow me now this honour
And the kids will be pleased to
Another uncle they will have
Cause they’ll be family too

So I’ll leave you be Dear Sister
Let you think of me a while
But I’ll know just where to find you
By the grin on that big smile.

 

 

 

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PLEASE no names yet, I'm a long lost Brother still.

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  • Tattboyspet
    October 3, 2007

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    a wonderful plea to give somebody a helping hand here Mike
    I am convinced that you were accepted as her big brother - well done on a wonderful dedication


  • Shakes-spear
    September 23, 2007

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    very nice

    Anyone would be happy to have someone like this as a family member. Good luck in the contest! The Shaker


  • SunDew
    September 19, 2007
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    Please read the comments on the contest page...especially the one entitled "A Note To All". Thank you!

    ~SunfloweRose


  • SunDew
    September 17, 2007

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    Talk about the brother I've always dreamed of! I have two brothers in real life; one is dead & the other I've never met (well, I never met the first, but I got to wait til I get to Heaven for that). Your poem describes the brother I've literally prayed for. What touched me deeply was the fact that you took the time to read my profile before you entered! It surprised & pleased me. & that special touch made the poem that much more personal. It's a beautiful poem - I can't even pick a favorite part, because I love the whole thing!

    Good luck!
    ~SunfloweRose


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 16, 2007
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    Wonderful!!!

    I love it!!!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Beautifully Spoken!!!

    Very Lovely Sentiments!!! From the Heart of Hearts!!! Best of luck in this contest!!! Peace and Love Forever, Cyn


  • pattyann4500
    September 16, 2007

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    Little brother, you do make a woman feel special. Your background is breathtaking, and the poem is elegant and soothing. Your rhyme is good, and the flow is smooth. How could anyone not choose you? Love, Patricia


  • moon2u
    September 16, 2007
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    This is simply lovely


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 16, 2007

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    well done my dearfriend - a man who is truly true to his word is a blessed gift from above. That is what you are a wonderful gift to all who know you. the host will be eternally blessed if she chooses you as her brother. Mike I love you. xxxxx


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    September 16, 2007

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    aawww what a sweet poem!! I was locked in with the first words. Great write and the background and pics go greately with the poem! Awesome job!
    MINDIE


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Soo pretty,I know she will love this,very nicely penned with all you have,she will be thrilled,good luck..MM


  • butterflywriter
    September 16, 2007

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    WOW!!!

    Well, if that doesn't speak to Brotherhood, I don't know what does...I'd have you for one for sure, beautiful.

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