The days stretch before her like a road
Each step she takes becomes an overload
Her shoes are worn and her dress threadbare
Covering all the dark bruises she wears
No one ever questions no one ever asks
It's hard to see her tears behind the masks
She wears with such conviction and might
It's hard to believe she never put up a fight
As cold as ice and hard as stone
She stands in silence all alone
A world of inconsequential disbelief
That can steal your soul like a thief
But still she hides biding her time
An angel made of stone in her mind...
A voice that cries out in the night
And neighbours bow their heads out of sight
A broken heart and a shattered peace
Where tears are shed and never cease
As cold as ice and hard as stone
She stands in silence all alone
A world of inconsequential disbelief
That can steal your soul like a thief
But still she hides biding her time
An angel made of stone in her mind...
While in this time and in this place
Shadows dance across each face
That echo each and every pain
An angel's crying sad refrain...
As cold as ice and hard as stone
She stands in silence all alone
A world of inconsequential disbelief
That can steal your soul like a thief
But still she hides biding her time
An angel made of stone in her mind...
Author notes
"love is like a photo"
Concrete Angel lyrics by Martina McBride
A contest entry
- heartbreaker by ExpectingMommy18.
550 points, ended September 22, 2007, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow...this is exactly what i wanted from this contest you did a wonderful job...thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest!
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Brilliant
I really enjoyed this one, loved the two lines,
"as cold as ice and as hard as stone
she stands in silence all alone."
Such wonderful imagery, very well penned, good luck!


