You have the heart of grace and the eyes of a survivor,
Yet you give me deadly wounds,
from something so pure like your smile.
Are you just a myth?
So realistic yet so fake.
Or are you my destiny?
My fate?
Your words, your amazing words
leave me with hope, but mostly confusion
The only thing i know for certain,
Is that my heart is truly yours,
And forever it will be
You always held me above the rest to drain my sorrow,
In your arms i feel at home,
You tell me that you love me,
But those words are so empty,
like a notebook waiting to be filled.
Waiting
Waiting
Waiting
I want to give up but i love you too much,
But your smile,
Your amazing smile,
Leaves me on the verge of tears.
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Beautiful write, I like this because everyone can relate to it. That longing for someone who seems to just drag you along by your heart. Awesome job!
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aww that is a great piece. thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.
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Wow, this is really beautiful, you really know how to put emotion into your words. Well done. :]
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thank you love
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Is this about someone? I love this so much, keep it up hun!
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