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Loving My Body, Loving Me

Slip, slick, slurping fun,
hot and wet, open-mouthed kisses.
Feeling you all over me
-- your hard muscles against my soft skin --
loving my body, loving me.

Whispering, moaning, groaning...
our hearts pounding together as one.
Feeding upon my passions,
driving me up and driving me wild;
loving my body, loving me.

Plunging deep, thrusting within;
shattering my inhibitions and filling my soul.
Our bodies twining, weaving,
rising, falling… igniting!
Loving my body, loving me.

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  • passionate-poet
    November 4, 2007
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    thats hot! haha

    great descriptions here ! i like it very hot and very sexy! thanks for sharing!


  • TheElf gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    AWESOME

    Baeutifully erotic without being in the least bit smutty. The love, passion and sexuality oozes out. Splendid imagery, beautiful metre. Write on poet!


  • delightfulmess
    September 15, 2007

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    Well this sounds like a splendid evening tangle
    Well done and thank you for entering my contest.

    delila

  • Juliespoetry
    September 15, 2007

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    Sounds like fun!

    Enjoyed your poem very much. That's how it should be, fun, fun, fun. Thanks for making me smile. Good luck with your entry. Julie.