Slip, slick, slurping fun,
hot and wet, open-mouthed kisses.
Feeling you all over me
-- your hard muscles against my soft skin --
loving my body, loving me.
Whispering, moaning, groaning...
our hearts pounding together as one.
Feeding upon my passions,
driving me up and driving me wild;
loving my body, loving me.
Plunging deep, thrusting within;
shattering my inhibitions and filling my soul.
Our bodies twining, weaving,
rising, falling… igniting!
Loving my body, loving me.
A contest entry
- Delightful Naughty Night Contest 24 hours or so. by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended September 15, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thats hot! haha
great descriptions here ! i like it
very hot and very sexy! thanks for sharing!


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AWESOME
Baeutifully erotic without being in the least bit smutty. The love, passion and sexuality oozes out. Splendid imagery, beautiful metre. Write on poet!

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Well this sounds like a splendid evening tangle
Well done and thank you for entering my contest.

delila

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Sounds like fun!
Enjoyed your poem very much. That's how it should be, fun, fun, fun. Thanks for making me smile. Good luck with your entry. Julie.



