Im sitting on the icy cold tile
floor crying the worthless tears
over you. Cutting your name deep
with in me so you'll always be
there.
Its all for you.
I'm writing your name on my walls
speaking it in my dreams. Leaving
you messages and voicemails, just
to show you that I'll never forget
you.
Just for you.
I'm sending you poems, writing you
songs. Just wanting to make you like
me, maybe even love me. I want to
be there for you dont you get it?
This all for you!
Buying you presents, lending you
things only to see you give them
to her.
Taking her out of the picture so
we can move on...so we can be happy...
together.
For you, all for you.
Im back on this icy tile floor because
of you. Crying over you...
Putting the knife to my wrist and the
gun to my heart.
I'm dying babe, and its all for you
Author notes
heartbreak
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suicide
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i'm such a mess, i wonder how i look through your eyes
A contest entry
- 130 titles by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended August 21, 2008, 40 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
love it or hate it, i could care less sometimes! ^_^
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It's amazing that someone can sit back & watch us destroy ourselves & not even lend a hand to help us up. These people make me sick. This is very sad and very real, for I can relate to this too. Sometimes you just want to not exist, without being something to them.
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I'm sending you poems, writing you
songs. Just wanting to make you like
me, maybe even love me. I want to
be there for you dont you get it?
This all for you!
sad
but nice write.
good luck -
It felt uneasy reading this, as I was in the same position almost 2 years ago, and i've tried hard to forget it. The darkness of this poem is absolutely immense, and it sent a chill down my spine when I read it.
I hope you felt better after writing this, I really do.
Best of luck in the contest -
this was a great poem
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Awesome! Good Luck.
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great write this was very touching, thank you for entering my contest you did a great job describing the obsession and suicide. anyway keep up the good work and good luck in the contest!
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Great peice and good luck in the contest!
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I love this poem,i can relate well,i jusr went through a breakup,theres alot of emotion and i would probly do the exavt same thing!
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Very powerful images I see here..but not crap
...shows so much expression tackling the page with gusto....so well done...smiles, Terry
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