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Advise For Life..... part 1.

For those, who might want
my humble advise for life,
I hope this will suffice.

Firstly, pride yourself on being nice,

secondly, always think and look twice,

if you don't, there could be a high price.

Be proud of what you have,

and where you're from,

passed times and places,

have made you what you are,

don't be embarrassed or ashamed,

your past is part of you, it should be framed,

and mounted on the wall,

to enlighten one and all.

Don't let anyone, make you feel small,

when they do,you must stand tall,

watch them as try,

catch them when they fall.

When falling in love, and you feel so alive,

remember,love comes with no garantee,

keep this reality in the back of your mind,

with life and love,you never know what

you'll find.

Your lover and you, however true,

it's like, the blind leading the blind,

one day you could be blind

and in a scary place,

alone you so suddenly find.

Share your soul,but with care,

be sure to keep your soul strong,

for there's only you,if things

do go wrong.

Help others when ever you can,

it builds you into a better man/woman.

Try not to be too needy,

nothing good comes from being greedy,

do what ever you can to help

save our planet,

visiting Mc Donolds,will, in time

make you a ganit.

Look to the future,think about it,

more importantly, you must plan it.

Or it will just happen anyway,

and your life will too quickly,

drift away.

So don't delay,

start making your plans today

 

 

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  • Stardust100
    September 28, 2007

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    Brilliant piece really made me think. I don't tend to read long Poems but this one kept me interested welldone:-)


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    September 17, 2007
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    thanks bell shant go to ronald mcdonald again good one my guru xxpp