I'm not going to lie how i feel about today
Halloween, halloween full of scary creatures
Ghost, ghouls, mummies, spiders, monsters and witches
Us kids dress up for the best part of all
CANDY CANDY!
Sweet and tasty makes me jump makes me scream
Halloween, halloween!
But theres one house on my street
No kid dares to enter
The house with the spider webs everywhere
The house with windows so dirty
The house with candles lit on a sunny day
That house with the creepy man that walks like
he's doing the moon dance
he is so creepy
I'll never forget the day he yelled at me
For tricker treating and haveing fun
But its HALLOWEEN HALLOWEEN! a fun tradition
so lets have some
fun.
Author notes
for this poem i used word bank:a. my poem i chose not to use any of the charaters of the following examples you guys made up. My main character is representing myself, and the old man was just one old crazy guy. this is how i feel bout halloween and i hope you enjoy it.
love stefi! xx
A contest entry
- 15 and Under ONLY ~ Win A Gold Membership in our Halloween Contest! by Amunet Wolfbane.
6000 points, ended November 14, 2007, 55 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I could really get into the feel and memory aspect of this piece. I think we've all experienced this sort of thing at some point in life. There always seems to be that one creepy house with the creepy person there
I have to be honest with the magnitude of this competition that the repetition didn't really grab me with "the house with" several times in a row. But...I can dig the scary aspect of it and it is a good piece. Hmm, pondering this one. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.
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I can remember how excited I always was to go trick or treating and now I get to watch my kids get all excited It really is a fun day for everyone to enjoy and you have showed us that here with your poem. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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You have done a pretty good job with this poem here
I could totally imagine myself in the scene actually 
I found two oopsies in last part:
'tricker treating' -> trick or treating
'haveing' -> having
Apart from that, you've done a remarkable job
Thank you very much for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck
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wow stefi this was a great poem
It was awesome. I liked the part about the old man
Wow. I really liked this! Very nice job, I wish you luck in the contest.
~pandy~
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