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I Miss That Feeling.

Somedays I find myself
thinking about him
about the days we'd hang out,
hold hands and kiss

I miss that
I don't miss him though
I miss the feeling
of being loved and wanted

I've only felt it once
with him, now that its over
I don't think
I'll ever feel it again

I thought he actually cared
but I was wrong
I thought the happiness was gonna stay
but it faded sooner than I expected

I miss that
being happy for once
I miss the feeling
of being loved and wanted

I can't stop thinking
about the days I was happy with him
Wrapped up in his arms
I felt so safe

Tears flow down my cheek
as I keep thinking
I know I'll never
get that feeling again

I miss that
feeling so safe in his arms
I miss the feeling
of being loved and wanted


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This how I've been feeling lately.

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  • camus gold member
    February 3

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    Hey, you expressed your feelings of lost love so well. I don't know you but was amazed that you think you will never experience love again, especially as you come across as a sensitive young lady who is attractive to look at and be with (judged on your pic and your homepage comments). Your poem tells me you have a lot to offer. Tony


  • redheadedgurl
    July 30, 2008

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    This blew me away because I have recently had a horrible breakup and I feel exactly how you explain wanting the feelings of love. <3 Mariah


  • So Strange
    April 17, 2008
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    I think that this was really deep and meaningful, Alyssa. I enjoyed this because you put a lot of emotion in it but used simple words to make just about anyone understand it. I enjoyed this, also, because the wording was very well done, as well.

    Keep up the great work, Alyssa. I enjoyed this as much as I have your past work.


  • CJDenton
    October 6, 2007
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    Join the club.


  • King Nothing
    September 18, 2007
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    *Kiss*

    LOVE

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