Boiling inside
Burning in me
Blurring my vision
Burying me
Author notes
ANGER!
A contest entry
- WORD ECONOMY CHALLENGE! Ten-Word Poems... by TooRainbow.
675 points, ended September 23, 2007, 21 entries
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Very angry. This truly created a picture of anger. Great write.
Carrie
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Mad write--pun intended!
I love that there is so much movement in this poem. Nice word usage and description: boiling, burning, blurring, and burying. Great use of poetic device, as well. I am particularly impressed by the stammering effect of the b-b-b sound of your alliteration. It also reinforces your first line in that it reminds me of bubbling. Lots of energy between the boiling image and the verbs. It suits the emotion you describe well. Anger is a strong feeling that fills us with a desire for action. Really nice job! Thank you!!
Sheryl
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wow..well done here..
Burying me
like that
All the best!
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thank you!
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oh how we often get to boiling the overflowing
this was full of great emotion
best wishes to you
Tory -
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thanks for your comment
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Anger turned inward tends to boil and rise anger turned outwards explodes in your eyes. I hope that these words released all the pressure, and that you’ll be happy cause you are a treasure. I love this poem I know how you feel; sometimes you just need to scream to get on an even keel.
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thanks for your comment, nice to know that someone gets what i'm writing about
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