Cries unheard, you think I don't feel.
Words never spoken, words never heard.
I lay snug in your womb listening to the rythmic beat of your heart, feeling the warm rush of blood pulsate through our bodies, My entitlement.
Carrying a love your'e too selfish to know.
Kill that which you claim as your own, Your entitlement.
Did I ask to be your unfortunate partner in this creation of death
Was your morbid intention to see my destruction?
You cry, I die, it is you that has chose our undoing,
Your entitled choice has brought me to disposal.
So many tatterd, so many torn, little hearts left behind,
bleeding massive graves of meaningless love.
All for your life and entitled mistakes.
A contest entry
- Anger - 24 hours by Tangled Angle.
300 points, ended September 16, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Abortion: Anything Goes by SignifyingNothing.
425 points, ended November 18, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great words here- 'entitlement' to abortion, yet the tragedy of it. I like this part: "So many tatterd, so many torn, little hearts left behind,
bleeding massive graves of meaningless love." And the ending is very, very powerful. This is by far the best poem I have received that was written from the point of view of the baby. (and I received very many like that)
Great job.
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Thank You so much!
It is my opinion and belief that abortion is about the baby not the mother and if only they could hear what their child would say perhaps they would choose a choice other than the selfish act of abortion. ( I do believe in choice and that abortion should be legal but only in extreme cases such as rape, birth defects ect...)
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I know exactly how you feel here. I felt every word. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Wow, that says a lot coming from the most hated man in poetry land,hahaha,J.K.
Thank You, and by the way, being honest usually ends up getting ya hated but there are the few who respect and admire honest critisisim. It's necessary.
Thanks Again.
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