I decided to go from the North to South
Traversing your body by means of my mouth
I started my trip with our tongues intertwined
Then mine went exploring, just what could it find
Nuzzling your neck and kissing your shoulder
The time was approaching when I would get bolder
Your breast were the target of quite an attack
My licking and nibbling had you arching your back
Each tender nipple delayed me a while
I don't think you minded, I glimpsed at your smile
My tongue in your navel, no fluff to be found
I've check it and checked it by licking all round
The goal of my travelling is getting quite near
From the short wiry hairs that I'm finding down here
I started at lips and two more I have found
Your hands hold my head, there's a soft moaning sound
A honey-well seems to have formed where I kiss
The sweetness I suck from my very own miss
I'm teasing each petal, now I'm raiding the flower
From the way you are breathing, you are in my power
A little way upwards, a bud almost glows
You groan as it touches the tip of my nose
Then I kiss it and lick it and tease it so light
Your moans reach crescendo
I love you
Goodnight
A contest entry
- Delightful Naughty Night Contest 24 hours or so. by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended September 15, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i think i like the ending the most...
the i love you at the end of a perfect time is the perfect closing line.
great write..i think i am addicted to reading your poetry lol
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brilliant write, congrats on the trophy, very well deserved, love the rhyme btw
xx
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This was brilliant! congrats on the Bronze
"My tongue in your navel, no fluff to be found
I've check it and checked it by licking all round" - lol - don't know whether this was intentional or not, but it made me smile ... was really cute
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Oh I absolutely loved this. It flowed nicely. and had some excellent visuals. Sensational
Thank you so much for entering
delila
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North to south via the equator
No need of a battery driven vibrator
Your tongue my love has done all the work
Precision the goal, your aim not to shirk
Beneath your touch I gladly arise
See that glint of lust in your eyes
I shall now do my part in return
My tongue to ignite you, my passions do burn
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If like this you keep replying
I shall have to take up spying
Find a map or get one lent
And rush in haste to deepest Kent!
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