Scavenger of my soul,
mayhem dwelling in life’s
doldrums; expired.
A contest entry
- WORD ECONOMY CHALLENGE! Ten-Word Poems... by TooRainbow.
675 points, ended September 23, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Dark!
"Scavenger of my soul,": what a powerful beginning! The trust taken and cast aside, the loss of innocence, the undoing! This is beyond secretive, it's cryptic, like the shame felt by one abused. Your candor is overwhelming! Through the agony, I can feel the courage and perseverence. You definitely capture the emotion of the situation. Nicely done...extremely emotional! Thank you for entering something so personal!
Sheryl
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Yikees
this one hit hard. powerful
piece my friend.
great job and best wishes in this
contest
tory -
Short and sweet - great usage of the words novy - good luck.
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