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Marigold Mourning

Chains of liquid
wrap between your thighs
defying the sighs gurgling
in your throat.

Brutal loins of deception
unfolding, collaring my
shoulders, squeezing the blood
rushing up to meet the challenge.

Simmering steam rising
from beneath my hunger eyes
liquid love dripping, spreading
into caverns of porous want.

Desire shifts to hatred
searing, tearing, parting
the waves of your passion
into Marigold mourning.

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This was sooooooooooooooo offensive to the host
that it was re-m o o v-ed

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 15, 2007

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    Ih my goodness that 1st stanza WHOA Well done
    thank you for entering my contest.


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