The glassy sea is before me
leaving impression of footprints
My life ahead smooth and stable
Behind are the storm clouds of hurt
Blazing sunrise marking the start
As strong waves go to and fro
My determination to persevere
As the darkest part of my life
Drifting endlessly out to sea
Loneliness has it’s corruption
Starting over, terrifying at times
Refreshing walk at the seashore
Renews the will to go forward
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Refreshing walk at the seashore
Renews the will to go forward
I can see where it would.
Refreshing little item.
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This piece touches on so many personal levels for me; I have struggled so many times with life issues and once I set out with determination to leave the garbage behind, I found the world a pretty cool place
This is written so very well; I enjoyed reading it!
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i need to find this beach
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hard to read your fonts but after getting to the read I could so closely relate to your words I have been there more than once and it is a good place to repose. I'll be reading again I read all of the poems at least twice. thanks for your entry and good luck **+
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Amazing as always
Your getting better and better! keep the amazing poems coming. much love B -
I love this write the more I read it the more I wanted. You did a amazing job on it, But wish it didn't end. And would have continued to read more of your great write. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
LISA
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Nice content
You still have more to write on this one, I feel, it's about half done in my opinion. But I will accept it as is; thanks for entering; it's a very good write. Walt. -
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Yes I have more to write it is only have done as is my life I hope. and the best is still ahead and the rest of my life is yet to begin. I'll write about that second chance at life later right now it's a day to day happening to put behind me the hurts. Thank you for your comment on my write.
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Beautiful write. I liked the imagery you describe in this piece. It makes me think of triumphing over a difficulty in life and coming through a problem as a stronger person. Good luck in the contests.
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wow, this was wonderful! Wonderful imagery in this. You did a great job on this!!! Gook luck in the contest and thanks for reading my poem!
~Michaela~
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