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Losing my Mind

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Lost in my mind with my children in my youth.
Husband by my side now that's not the truth.
My mind goes back to a time of great joy.
My husband two girls and my baby boy.

Now that's all over they have all gone away.
The kids have grown and I am here to stay.
One has gone to heaven to her new home.
To be joined by her daddy she won't be alone.

But the loss of these thing's my pain I cant hide.
Just silly little thing's that bring it all inside.
My memory's I love but they cause me such pain.
So I laugh for a while until the tears fall again.

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 19, 2008

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    Simple rhyme but definitely stunning - love the inspiration you have penned here - very beautiful.

  • californiagirl
    September 19, 2007
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    wow. very powerful. Thank you for your entry!


  • captain howdy
    September 15, 2007
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    This is a very sad piece, yet beautifully penned.Thank you for sharing this.