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Black Widow's Loom

Battle-scarred warrior...amber tiger eyes,
Man-of-deception: stoic, conniving.
Vagabond roses, train whistles and lies;
Red velvet petals wilted, lie dying.

Man-of-deception; stoic, conniving.
Profile in black standing tall on the cliffs;
Red velvet petals wilted, lie dying.
As mist blankets night...foghorn blares three riffs.

Profile in black standing tall on the cliffs
Icicle of fire; man-child filled with ire.
As mist blankets night, foghorn blares three riffs.
Lost his youth to lust's desires; silky pyre.

Icicle of fire; man-child filled with ire;
Battered and bruised abused beyond repair.
Lost his youth to lust's desire; silky pyre.
Elegant, sleek...a spider weaves her snare.

Battered and bruised, abused beyond repair.
Razing two glasses...swallow the future.
Elegant, sleek...a spider weaves her snare.
Crimson...cunning; spinnerettes web rapture.

Razing two glasses...swallow the future
Sipping Death's cider mystic passion wakes;
Elegant, sleek...a spider weaves her snare
...preys on the darkness, morbid spoils he takes.

Sipping Death's cider mystic passion wakes
Shadow of darkness drips petals of doom;
...preys like a phantom, morbid spoils he takes,
Entombs her soul on his Black Widow's loom.

Shadow of darkness drips petals of doom
Vagabond roses, train whistles and lies;
Entombs her soul on his Black Widow's loom,
Battle-scarred warrior...amber tiger eyes.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 19, 2007
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    Wicked!

    Awesome write, deeply dark. Good luck in the contest!


  • krymsin kyss
    October 18, 2007

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    This was written very beautifully..and was very enjoyable to read. Great imagery. Thanks for entering and good luck :]
    Avec amour *~Krysmin Kyss~*