Battle-scarred warrior...amber tiger eyes,
Man-of-deception: stoic, conniving.
Vagabond roses, train whistles and lies;
Red velvet petals wilted, lie dying.
Man-of-deception; stoic, conniving.
Profile in black standing tall on the cliffs;
Red velvet petals wilted, lie dying.
As mist blankets night...foghorn blares three riffs.
Profile in black standing tall on the cliffs
Icicle of fire; man-child filled with ire.
As mist blankets night, foghorn blares three riffs.
Lost his youth to lust's desires; silky pyre.
Icicle of fire; man-child filled with ire;
Battered and bruised abused beyond repair.
Lost his youth to lust's desire; silky pyre.
Elegant, sleek...a spider weaves her snare.
Battered and bruised, abused beyond repair.
Razing two glasses...swallow the future.
Elegant, sleek...a spider weaves her snare.
Crimson...cunning; spinnerettes web rapture.
Razing two glasses...swallow the future
Sipping Death's cider mystic passion wakes;
Elegant, sleek...a spider weaves her snare
...preys on the darkness, morbid spoils he takes.
Sipping Death's cider mystic passion wakes
Shadow of darkness drips petals of doom;
...preys like a phantom, morbid spoils he takes,
Entombs her soul on his Black Widow's loom.
Shadow of darkness drips petals of doom
Vagabond roses, train whistles and lies;
Entombs her soul on his Black Widow's loom,
Battle-scarred warrior...amber tiger eyes.
Author notes
Option #1
A contest entry
- Give me something good!!!! by OnyxtheForsaken.
700 points, ended October 1, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Spooky by krymsin kyss.
600 points, ended October 30, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wicked!
Awesome write, deeply dark. Good luck in the contest! -
This was written very beautifully..and was very enjoyable to read. Great imagery. Thanks for entering and good luck :]
Avec amour *~Krysmin Kyss~*


