Fall is ceaseing,
Winter is begining.
I miss you so,
This time last year my face was all a glow.
Now I set here in my cottage,
Does'nt seem all that cozy anymore.
At night the forest scares me,
I don't even walk outside.
I sit and watch the moon glow off the river,
As my horse sleeps in his stable.
Author notes
Option #3 C word bank.
A contest entry
- PIF Contest Now allowing PreWrites IF they go with the options by Amorous Arms.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - And the winner is....Prewrites! Prewrites!! and Prewrites!!! by Daizy21.
450 points, ended September 25, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It’s amazing how you captured the essence of being lonely in such a short but powerful poem. Truly beautiful, thank you for entering and good luck!
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This is a good poem, short and to the message in a flash.
I felt a little sadness while reading this piece..... It was probably just me!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work! -
Tenderness
A fine quality sometimes neglected by poets. As I sit next to you a gaze at the winter moon
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awww. sweet. shows love and pain. very nice. short and sweet as well =] wonderful write. thanks for entering. good luck.
~Ali
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