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Wrong Instincts

Mean,
Hateful,
Unintelligent,
Insane,
Person you are.
I'm not interested.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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  • BloodmoonFox
    March 3, 2008

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    LOL

    that was funny as a a pot flying on its on and hiting a wall..ok that would be scary real....us is not its short and funny and very serious to i thought it was funny great work and nice job on the next poems u write


  • maralisa silver member
    January 22, 2008
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    great write a few words say such alot


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 8, 2007
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    Interesting.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • rose petal desires
    September 27, 2007

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    this is the form of poetry i like
    it almost well in my eyes is a stage vocal that can be performed


  • MahoganyFlow
    September 27, 2007

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    LOL! I like the last line. It shows the maturity in you. and I like that it's straight to the point. Keep Writing!!


  • DancingRed
    September 25, 2007

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    This poem was entered in a previous contest I've hosted, so will not win here. Feel free to enter something else.


  • Nicotine Eyes
    September 25, 2007
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    :o

    love it


  • DancingRed
    September 21, 2007
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    This piece is powerful in it's brevity. Very frank.
    Thanks for entering.

    DancingRed.

  • phoenixonfire
    September 15, 2007

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    wonderful imagery and the way u have presented is really cool!
    pri


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    Great power in your words. Perfect for the prompt..We were thinking along the same lines

    Lynda

  • phoenixonfire
    September 15, 2007
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    hey there!

    Thanks for entering my contest!

    Here is your prompt:

    Wounded instincts

    Or

    The pic !!

    YOu have 10 words to write 10 minutes!

    Please add in your author comments which one u chose!

    Thanks again and good luck!

    HAve fun and be creative!

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