spring:
snipes accompany
the pilgrims
cherry blossoms fall
on Otowa-no-taki pond:
plovers' feathers
a blind girl walks
toward the other stone:
will she find love?
aromas waft
from sushi and incense:
the crowd parts
camphor tree:
papers with wishes
flap in the air
Author notes
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kiyomizu_Temple
A contest entry
- Kiyomizu Temple in Kyoto by azure85.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on your winnning poem; I would like to include it in our collection on the World Wonders. I am pleased to invite you to submit your short bio to this contest so that I will have your information, if you are interested. http://allpoetry.com/contest/2370860
Thanks!
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ola!
thanks so much for the opportunity. feel freeeeee to include it; i would be the most honoured!! 
Sorry i missed out on that contest link you sent. i was away for a "chess" tournament in the east of India. Came back last night. i'll just IM you my bio.
thanks a million again!
bless ya!
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A lovely set of haiku, each one an excellent snapshot of Kiyomizu Temple throughout the year. They were a delight to read, thank you so much for your contribution.
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they were a delight to write!
and it feels lovely to be back on AP after a whole week! ^_^
thanks so much for the gold! but i was sad to find only 6 entries for your contest.. there should've been many more!!
anyway, thanks again!
bless ya!
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oh i love this its just beautifully penned
and i love all the little groups
creates a great effect well done and best of luck
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hola! thanks so much!!
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