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passionately desiring,
wanton abandon,
the need, the urge,
craving you.

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Lust.

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  • McRae by nature
    September 20, 2007

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    Yeah, I knew exactly what you meant before I was finished reading it. Great job. You described lust so perfectly.

    Carrie

  • TooRainbow silver member
    September 17, 2007
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    Very sensual!

    Aptly put! I knew, without a doubt, that you are describing lust. It is evident in your first line! A most steamy write! I love the line "wanton abandon" and how it really captures the feel of the emotion, both the lack of control and concern for it. Nice job and nice entry! Thank you very much!
    Sheryl


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    *shew* wow.
    Yes indeed i felt this one. well done
    great expression and the flow perfect.
    best of luck to you although i dont think you
    will need it
    Tory