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Sad

A life that is sad
Little good, lots of bad.

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A contest entry

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  • TooRainbow silver member
    September 17, 2007

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    Very Melancholy!

    The tone of this just drips with heart-wrenching darkness. The life itself is sad in your opening line, not the situation or event, but the life. Very expressive write! Thank you for entering it! Sheryl


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    indeed spoken with truth.
    best of luck to you in this
    contest dear poet. alot of good entries here.
    tory