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Joy

A life replete with joy
Lots of glee, little cloy.

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A contest entry

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  • TooRainbow silver member
    September 17, 2007

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    Nice job!

    Great use of poetic devices: perfect meter, form and rhyme. It's difficult to pay such close attention to form and still have a congruent, natural-sounding verse. You pull it off beautifully. I like the elevated vocabulary you use to reinforce your elated emotion. It is eloquent and fits your theme. Unique that you used two lines to pack in your ten words. Very concise. Interesting that you use the emotion you are describing in the body of your poem. Really nice job on this! Thank you for entering! This was an absolute delight to read!!
    Sheryl


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    well expressed here.
    Joy something always a pleasure to have.
    great job,
    best wishes in this contest.
    Tory