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Feather to Feather

Missing image


feather to feather
huddled on line of scrimmage
avian rainbow







Author notes

Haiku

The painting title 'Chorus Line', artist: Wendy Wegner

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A contest entry

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    Love the birds and the words


  • Anna Emkah
    April 16, 2008

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    WOW.... what a nice Haiku.
    The picture compliments your words or vice versa.
    Very well done.
    Anna.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    Congratulations with your trophy!
    May you always be inspired by beautiful images


  • MagicLady silver member
    September 29, 2007
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    I really appreciate your darling haiku that you wrote for this contest. I love to write haiku, tanka and cinquains about birds. The short little dittys seem to fit perfectly with birds. I especially like the image of a line of scrimmage....they certainly have to battle alot in their lives. Thanks again.

    Cheryl


  • ronnica
    September 19, 2007

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    Very colourful Haiku. I wonder if it is because they all want the same little bit, or just to be close.


  • MargaretG
    September 17, 2007

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    Sweet

    Avian rainbow is right! Aren't we lucky to have such lovely birds?
    This is a great haiku on this painting, with a lovely revelation in the third line.

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