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The Pleasure Zone

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Her Back Arches
a moan seeps
from her mouth
as I suck and
lick her belly

She strokes the
back of my neck
then pulls my
face closer, as
I reach her "spot"

I feel her moist
lips,as I tease
then all at once
my tongue enters
to taste her nectar

Those sounds she
makes, drives me
insane, and it
only heightens
my sexual hunger

I want stop, until
I feel her "Pleasure
Zone" is satisfied
and she has given me
all of her passion fruit


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I love the picture, it's hot!

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  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    June 14, 2008

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    mmmmm must go take shower now, my i feel deprived lmao!

    Tasha


  • TheElf gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    Hot Hot Hot

    Great poem. You have beautiful imagery and metre in this very erotic and most sensual poem. Erotic with no trace of smut. The poem is about love, desire, passion. Write on poet!


  • FaeryMouse
    September 16, 2007
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    pretty good... i ll show you later what my true feelings are


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 15, 2007

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    Oh la La nicely done Great visuals here
    Love this thank you so much for entering.


    delila


  • Beret55 silver member
    September 15, 2007
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    Nicely done.

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