I found a grey pubic hair
down there today
and i'm starting to wonder
if he's really going to wake up
hug me when you can barely
tell me my name
pinch my tits when
that's all you can recognize
do i make my own situation
with these choices i make
do i make it with
the expectations
i put on him?
do i run to my other demons
risk this little buddha sandcastle
we've made so well together
because the beer tide of promises
is coming in
and i'm too tired
to swim
How would you interpret this? What does this say to you? I want to share this with someone i care about, but i'm not sure what it says to someone else.
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omg ... i laughed so hard i peed my pants haha i love this poem i had to read it again just bc i laughed so hard my eyes were watery haha it sounds like one of those sarcastic type of stories about a guy goin through a phase in his life haha thanks for sharing
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I don't think I can make an honest assessment on this until you let me pinch your tits, and then I'll know what we're dealing with here!
[OK, for real, it sounds like despite whatever qualities he may have, these are the first impressions that came to you when you wrote it. There's something Freudian here that says you should resolve to improve your own lot in life by not hanging around someone in a voluntary coma. This was written almost seven months ago now, so if you ever make it back on to A.P., it will be interesting to get your update. Did you continue to hang with him? If yes, is it a success? I stopped by because once, a very long time ago, you left a very humorous comment on one of my pieces and I was hoping you hadn't given up the ship, so to speak.]
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P.S. What was the funny thing i said, What piece? I'd like to read it again.
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Haha! I decided to man the deck? Wow, i'm not good with nautical innuedos.
Point being: i'm still with him and things have improved greatly. Nothing like honest communication! Seriously, If i never would have gotten the guts to just tell him honestly how i felt, things would never have gotten better. He's not a brute. He cares sincerly for my well-being. I consider myself a lucky girl, indeed.
That said, commence the nipple pinching!
Lizbian
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I think it says that you've been staying in a disappointing relationship.
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Thank you for your thoughts
What i'm getting from your comment is that maybe i need to express how he is very fulfilling in other ways. Yes, i am disappointed in his lack of resolve at times, but i love everything else about him. His other great attributes are what keeps me with him. I wouldn't be conflicted otherwise. Is there anything you think this personally lacks?
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do i make my own situation
with these choices i make
'a girl at a party who was obviously on acid, was placing her hands towards the sky in stange ways, when i asked her was she catching stars she replied know, i am making them...'
this says to me, you need some wind of karmic change, for sometimes try and try and try just leads to try and try and try, and then with the right meditation, the right angle of adversity, the higher selves in both begin to open... and the percentage of over doing it might be the wrong thing, but a shift in perspective can open up the old classics alike a photo album of young fools...
anyheys this is a very strong emotional and personal write i truly hope you find that loving memory, thanks soo much for the care, the points and for sharing this,
W fairies and water-melon ice cream
-jas
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You rock
Your words are truly encouraging Jas, thank you!I think you're right and we both have so much potential and flexability for change. It's happening everyday i think. I think sometimes i forget why it's so hard for him to quit and i need to mindful of the fact that i have my own vices as well. Yeah, different perspectives can be a breath of fresh air.
L
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