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The work of an angel

Created in the Heavens
Near misty star's abright
Your smile was invented
And granted 'pon first light.

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  • mackereth
    February 24, 2008
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    i need you to read all my rules before i can judge you poem

  • Virginia Logsdon
    December 28, 2007
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    So cute!

    Gee!This could be turned into a song for someone you love.


  • DarkoKatie
    September 15, 2007

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    kaithleen

    wow i think ur an angel somewhere in side and ur really good and should keep writng coz angels do so much and i'm sure ur an angel somwhere inside and could create something like that...xox