IT WAS A CHEMISTRY PERIOD!
THE ONLY TIME WHEN I AM VERY FORGETFUL!
ALWAYS AND ALWAYS!!
ITS REALLY FRETFUL!
I DONT KNOW WHETHER THIS IS A MUST!
TO FORGET DOING HOMEWORK!
BUT FINALLY I CRACKED THE CRUST!
BUT THERE WAS SOMEONE LIKE ME,
WHO FORGOT TO WRITE CHEMICAL EQUATIONS
POOR THING!
I HURRIEDLY HELPED HIM DO,
AND WHO FELT HAPPY?WHO?
IT WAS MEE! ONLY MEE!
WHEEEEE!
I FELT AS THOUGH I HAD WON A MARATHON
WE GOT PAST!WE WON!
WE DIDNT GET SCOLDINGS
BUT THIS WAS A HAPPINES I NEVER GOT IN MY LIFE!
A WONDERFUL EMOTION IT WAS!
I LOVE IT...
A contest entry
- WORD ECONOMY CHALLENGE! Ten-Word Poems... by TooRainbow.
675 points, ended September 23, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
WHAT DO THINK ABOUT THIS?I CANT EXPRESS IN WORDS THE HAPPINESS
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Bubbly!
This has such a happy-go-lucky feel to it. I can picture you skipping away from chemistry class, swinging your books and grinning broadly! I get a very real sense of elation from your words. What a double reward you must have felt in the situation you describe: proud of yourself for finally remembering to do your own homework and then being the one to help someone else because of it! Thank you for this treat and for entering!
Sheryl
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well done yet rules stated 10 words lol not that it bothers me for i enjoyed this here piece and im not the judge,well done i say again
Tory -
I thought the idea of this contest was to write about a single emotion in ten words???
I did like this, though. Made me laugh and skip for joy. Happy. Happy. Happy. Wow. Definitely a wonderful emotion. -
hey this is nice, i know how it is to have an overwhelming happiness u can't express, and in your case i guess it was helping your friend, how sweet.
i hope you write more ... awaiting more work from you.. good job
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HAPPINESS
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