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Hourglass Time



A leaf of pure intent tumbles dangerously
upon wild wind currents
then disappears behind a knoll of mystery;

a gentle breeze of a sudden surprise
returns the paper-thin parcel with a message
playing from the leaf's dewdropped eyes-

an image of future contentment is passed
over a pond of deep desire
the leaf then settles upon an hourglass;

time turns over, again 
while the warmth of steady love continues
with the creaking echoes in the forest glen-

clear, cracking, the snaps ring
from the oaks swaying with a sturdy friendship
over the strewn, prickly needles of the evergreen.

Timepiece sands trickle down, hours pass seamlessly;
time never empties, a long kiss simmers
in the reflected heat of a measured evening;

across the pond other trees sway, a leaf is lost, upward climbs
finds, alights, then gently plays
on the imperceptible motions of hourglass time.




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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 15, 2007
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    VERY nice entry,I know this is a good possibility of
    3 choices..good luck mm


  • Tangled Angle
    September 15, 2007

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    I asolutely love the metaphors.

    And the meaning behind this. It's so true about how life can be.

    Wonderful.