After so long of fighting hidden desires,
The time then comes for flesh upon flesh,
Soul to merge with soul.
The smooth satin of her skin,
Caressed with the malleable,
Teasing charm of his tongue.
His tasting,
Sending an icy thrill through her spine,
Her skin raising its protest of such pleasure.
Her eyes cannot focus,
As her heart beats madly,
And the home of her desires makes its readiness known.
Suddenly the upper half of her body,
Feels the warmth embrace of his heat,
His mouth descending so she tastes his exploits.
It only drives her higher,
As she uses her boneless legs to pull him closer,
She urges him to brand her with his passion as she moans her approval.
He answers her siren call,
Completing her,
Joining their bodies in a transcendental embrace.
She marks the muscles of his back,
Wishing their bodies were no obstacle,
As he finds the rhythm of their love.
There is one more thing they both desire,
A final bond,
Both descend their teeth to the swell of their life.
Pushing over the edge,
Exaltation and exuberance are met,
Sated they lie in each others arms, bonded, and joined.
Author notes
My first attempt at writing an erotic piece. I used the picture as a prompt, I hope it suffices at ok. I have no idea what to think of it lol
A contest entry
- Delightful Naughty Night Contest 24 hours or so. by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended September 15, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW! i like it. i really think its just wow i know it doesnt rhyme but to me it makes it better i like the way it made me feel. I felt like i wanted to cry... it was beautiful.
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wow considering this is your first erotic piece, this is amazing. It doesn't have cheap wording and doesn't get straight in, it explains how it started - how the heat started, which is what I love about this write. well done on a fab write! xx
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Well that was a very warm write indeed. Excellent flow and passion streaming throughout...and the imagery...Bravo!!
Wyatt xxx
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Oh My!! is it warm in here or what? Ali.. well
done on this erotic piece...ooooo.. it breaths
with sensuality .. huffing and puffing all the way
through.
laurie.
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Well for being your first erotic poem WOW Well done.
You certainly have the talent for it. Great Job with this little steamer and thank you for entering the contest.
delila
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I like the way this one start out
When one hide the feeling of not caring and then give into it make it wonderful and beautiful at the same time. You chose words that speak out the feeling and then the feeling come together and they bond. You did a beautiful pice here. I love it very much.
You are a great writter.
Morningstar
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