Pulsating waves of lust and desire
tingling my throbbing member
Ravishing of a moist and tasty treat
licking, sucking as she begs a pleads
Grabbing her tightly seducing all needs
savoring the scent on my lips
Indulging in seductive pleasures
i start to bump and grind on her hips
Plunging into a hot and wet crevice
moving together in a frantic manner
Our bodies entwined in this night's pleasure
screaming out we cum together
Trembling orgasm, sweating, heart's beating
sighing with contentment
we hold each other
A contest entry
- Delightful Naughty Night Contest 24 hours or so. by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended September 15, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my goodness! (having difficulty breathing) this sure paints a vivid picture
Sooo hot and yummy.
See....this is where I could get better.
Um...the style...not..uh...the subject...oh, crap
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*gulp* 
Yeah This is a ummm.. Yeah. It's erotic lol. VERY vivid descriptions and lustful bursts of imagery to weave such an embrace. Well expressed indeed - capturing the beauty, the chemistry, and the needful delight of it all. Well done!
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I refuse to comment on the grounds it might incriminate me! Taking the fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth, ninth, and what ever else it takes to rid my mind of this imagery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY EYES MY EYES!!!!!!!! Blinded for life!*P.S* congrats on your silver, that was the last thing I saw before being blinded permanently! lol 
have a great day ~blessings alway~
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cracking poem here, brilliant wording used, mildly erotic but not cheesy or sickly. very well written, congrats on your silver xx
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My, my, my.
Never know what to expect when you hit that "return the favor" button. Write on! And Rock on!
*PEACE*
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Well hehe this is a very nice piece.Congratulations on the silver well earned indeed best wishes and much love.
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Excellent
Very well done. What a great poem for the contest. Congrats on your silver.
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congrats hun on the silver xoxoxoxoxoxoox my dear friend i told you you would do well mmm i can see you role playing this one out well and often xxxx
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oh man... this is a serious role in the sheets
Loved the energy... always a good character trait in the midst of passion.
Well done. Thank you for entering.
delila
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Holy Mother of Magnificence!!
*drops*
Now I have to inhale Erotic pieces in moderation
or the squeegee might file a lawsuit against me
Powerful images You have penned with Your quill
and because this is anonymous~
my lips are sealeddddddddddddddd
I walked into a wall looking at the picture
which Inspired this contest
Plunging and Indulging...those are some
serious bring it on words
Great job fellow Poet
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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sweating here
what can i say but... oh how I remember... hot write dear poet
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Love it....
reading a pic interpretation from a male standpoint is incredible...
You did a wonderful job on this piece...You are an incredible wordsmith...
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