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Remember....

All of this
Bloodshed
All of this
Misread
The lost side
of my mind
the darkness
takes my side
i really dont
want to feel this way...

Remember everything is said
Remember all the i love yous
Remember my love im always here for you
i jus dont want to lose you
you mean too much to me...
Ive lost my soul...

The bloodshed
staining my memories
the misread signals
left in the dust
My insanity lost
to the darkness
of my consicence
No more caring
no more feelings...

Remember everything is said
and done
Remember all the i love yous
left to the past
Remember my love im always here for you
anytime you need me
i jus dont want to lose you
you mean too much to me...
Ive lost my soul...

My soul is gone
i cant feel this way
for long
it will make me lose
my mind
well what i have left
i just cant sit back
and wait...
i just cant!

Remember everything is said
and done
Remember all the i love yous
left to the past
Remember my love im always here for you
anytime you need me
i jus dont want to lose you
you mean too much to me...
Ive lost my soul...

Try not to die
Try not to cry
try not to run and hide
I confide in you
my soul is dead...
and so am i...

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  • Glamour Kills x3
    September 19, 2007
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    This is awesome =)
    I love it.
    This one is by far my fav one =)
    It's about time that you put some more poems on here
    i've had writers block for the longest time.
    but, yeaaa....
    Glad to see that you still have the talent of writing amazing things =)
    can't wait to see more of your work. =)


  • deadheartedkitty
    September 16, 2007

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    i'm sorry to hear that you are going through a tough time... but this was verry well written...so much so that i could see the bloodshead

    DHK


  • DarkoKatie
    September 15, 2007

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    kaithleen

    that was totally awsome you must have so much love for many people and they must be really lucky to know a person like you


    • Mr. J
      September 16, 2007
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      thank you for the comment...yea..i do have alot of love for my friends and family...if you wouldnt mind would you read some more of my stuff and tell me what you tthink and what you would like o see in my future works

      tony