No use slipping into silk and lace,
I won’t leave it on you long.
Don’t worry about what you do,
Cause you can do no wrong.
With those sexy eyes looking up at me,
Your giving pleasures that I seek.
I can’t describe this ecstasy,
And my knees are getting week.
Now I’m looking at your pretty face,
While returning pleasures of the same.
Your fingers tangle in my hair,
And you softly call my name.
With our lips together pressing hard,
I hear you moaning low.
I’m so deep inside of you,
And loving you so slow.
With passions rising to the top,
And crashing down, no compromise.
I catch my breath and kiss your lips,
And see the love light in your eyes.
This is heaven.
P.N.
In a list
A contest entry
- Delightful Naughty Night Contest 24 hours or so. by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended September 15, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *~ Got a Pre-Write? ~* by Desire.
525 points, ended November 30, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Erotic Pleasures by Jonathan Wikkins.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sexy*Sexy Writes by Poetic Butterfly.
600 points, ended May 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold VIII - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended May 29, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold X - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended June 2, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Erotic Challenge Season 9 by Master Ktulu.
550 points, ended February 9, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Help me find my muse!!!!! *pre-writes now allowed* by MyMudPies.
425 points, ended June 26, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very sensual indeed. Very beautiful and very loving. Seemed rather true to life almost.
**Master Ktulu** -
Beautiful
Such sensual feeling and deep emotion from start to finish. Very romantic. The love is evident in your words and my favorite line..."Don’t worry about what you do/Cause you can do no wrong." That speaks volumes showing love that is more than "skin deep". Making love is more than the physical. Of course, I like the imagery of "Your fingers tangle in my hair..." lol...but you've captured the total love making experience of body and soul.
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Welcome Back!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
Second stanza-week- weak~
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful Your piece qualifies and elated to see You backBest wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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BEAUTIFUL
Hi
I hope this note greets you with a happy heart my dear poetic friend.I have just finished reading your poem. This write is absolutely beautiful and so full of sensuous emotion and passion at the same time. I can't pick out a specific line I like the best.
I love the poem as a whole.I also liked the erotic imagery in this very much. It's not over the top, but beautifully done in a great and wonderful taste.This is the way all sensual writes should be written,soft and loving with beautiful imagery.It gives me warms tingles just reading this.
It is a truly beautiful piece,and I really loved it. It is so innocently written, so sweet and just a really nice image,and the way you worded it makes the reader want to keep on reading on and on.. the descriptions were absolutly wonderful.
It's a sensuous erotic write that you have crafted here. It holds a lot of passion and feelings,an art form with your words as the paint and your mind as the brush. You paint a wonderful picture with imagery in the mind........
Take care my friend, and keep penning that erotica,and I will keep (cumming) oops lol lol ...coming back to read.
Many beautiful blessings of love and happiness to you.
Your loving friend in poetry
~Angel~
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Lovely rhyme....sexy write!!!
"Now I’m looking at your pretty face,
While returning pleasures of the same.
Your fingers tangle in my hair,
And you softly call my name."....I love this verse, very romantical
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Thank you Butterfly. I'm glad you liked it.
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Very well done
Making love is a truly beautiful, spiritual, and awesome experience and you wrote of it...well...HOT
Wishing you the very best!
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wow, another great piece for my contest!
it's gonna be tough to figure out the winners...
good luck and thanks for entering!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
Wonderful
Very creative and expressive. Best of luck in the contest
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Making Love
Wonderful piece You have weaved with much emotion and sensual images to take the reader on a passionate journey...
Can't help but feel as if there watching love unfold
Loved these lines:
Now I’m looking at your pretty face,
While returning pleasures of the same.
Your fingers tangle in my hair,
And you softly call my name.
Magnificent verse You have penned~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Judging will be done shortly
Many blessings to You in our Group contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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within these lines
passion rolls
like thunder
through a narrow canyon
a force that makes
even stone tremble
Great job Hun!
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I really enjoyed the soft flow of this very enticing
Love the romantic.
delila
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Glad you liked it Delila. Any thing to please a lady.
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Not rude enough for Barty!
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very sexy
and sweet
your flow was great in this poem
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Thank you for your comment and applause sweet lady.
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