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Birthday Pleasures mmmmm

There is a fire within us..
needing only your touch,
bringing flames of desire.
Passion ignites...

sending surges down spine
of intense sensuality
making my senses whirl...

coolness of lips upon
moistening pleasure mound
souls burning with desire

Delve deeply into me
with your hot tongue
Devour my juices,
tasting my true essence

Feel my passions arise
My body's craving for more!
Sharing a birthday of ecstasy

fill my pleasure island
with your manly hardness
making my wishes come true

making love as we have dreampt
together as two souls united
with passions eternal...

It's how you make your angel feel
that makes our desires worthwhile
You are my everlasting treasure.

Are you, my dearest, ready for more?

my birthday isn't over yet; just begun  mmmmm





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  • StarEyes
    December 30, 2008

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    Oh my goodness! What a read this one is! I think I need a cold shower! Oh My! When you write HOT, You write HOT! hehe. this is one hot write!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Oh wow! Heehee I love this Birthday Gal!
    I sure hope you had a wonderful day, peace...
    And Much love to your sweet soul always.

    -Timothy


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 15, 2007

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    Oh La La Really enjoyed this.
    Nothing like a wonderful birthday.
    Great job thank you for entering.

    delila