Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Soul

Eyes will not see the end of mystery
the soul may know it well, sensing
even through the walls of life, answers.

We may not lose our souls
but can deny the things that
we perceive; separating
thoughts from our deeper understanding;

turning a bridge of knowing

into a chasm of doubt, which feeds upon itself
most destructively;
like a starving animal
consuming the muscle of its heart.

The soul may be a portal to existence and
raise us to understanding;
what if people really lived
in certainty of an eternal soul?
Would we cherish life more? wage war less?
find more beauty and compassion?

Finding faith that we have something within
that persists beyond life, we are wise to
nurture it just as as we feed our lives,
to enrich our experience; more abundant life.



A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

  • LadyLavender gold member
    October 5, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    like a starving animal
    consuming the muscle of its heart

    Powerful write...truly!

  • Eulb kcalB
    October 3, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    excellent


  • Heart Sutra
    October 3, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Faith is really important...without it we all struggle within the darkness. Great poem.


  • Providence
    September 15, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Oh! Very nice, PK. It seems that it is our own separation from our souls that lead us into the chasms of suffering. This is very prolific.

    If only we could lift in the certainty of our Souls, this world would be quite a different place!


  • Mallig gold member
    September 15, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    This is beautiful and profound in so many ways. Loved the line "Eyes will not see the end of mystery", we can never know everything on this earth, but we should at least be true to what we do know,
    "We may not lose our souls
    but we can deny the things that
    we perceive; separating
    thoughts from our deeper understanding"
    Terrific write!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 15, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Oh quickly, woudl you check "uderstanding"...that is my kind of typo This poem is worthy of the change..it is evocative and such truth here to be contempalted...even if we do not know, it does go up into the vapor to find its place.


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    September 15, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    L14 typo "understanding"

    Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.


  • JinSays gold member
    September 15, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Eyes will not see the end of mystery
    the soul may know it well, sensing
    even through the walls of life, answers.

    WOW!!
    That gives more inspiration, that's just fabulous!!
    I was struggling, Thanks!!

1 - 8 of 8