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Black clouds are rising

Black clouds are rising
God's children crying
looking for angel's
to carry them home.
Mountains are crumbling
the stars have all fallen
down to the sea
Sun she is burning
people can't breathe
the black clouds are rising
the animals in hiding
the trees are all dieing
water is gone
life so polluted
our children are screaming
God gave us this world
and see what we've done

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  • parenchma
    September 7
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    Just wait until the chinese and indians get cranked up...

  • Ibrah
    March 17
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    Pretty good

    You've got talent.....I've read a couple of your poems. I liked this the most....Cheers!!!!


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    December 21, 2007

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    A fantastic write!!!!!!!!!  A wonderful rendition of what's to come!!!!!!!!!! I really loved this read!!!!
    You are a great writer!!!! Congratulations on the win!!!!


  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    September 21, 2007

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    yes and it is a crying shame what we have done and worse than that we are still doing it good write ***
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