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the beauty of a physcotic stranger

i find myself wandering lost within the woods of your lies
hoping those white arrows would lead me...

us to something other than irritating skin and washed out faces
something we lacked was self control.
our flesh & bones were nothing but dust particles-
useless and harmful.

we no longer watch sunsets and shooting stars

our lives grew tired of wishing for cherubic endings

we no longer watch sunsets

the light glared our eyes,
reminding us about death/
even though we were already there

we no longer watch

with soreness in minds and eyes a purpose was no longer the priority,

we no longer

the satisfying sound of the words, no longer.
and there goes the last one_

we.
is no more.

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  • Crimson Blaze
    September 15, 2007

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    once again a brillian peice by you.
    it sounds as if there were a couple of words that were left out in a place or two but i still loved reading it so much. great write.