Twinkle in the light of daybreak
to a place yet far away
where our Winken, Nod, and Blinken
have so long been cast away.
Where two hearts shall come to knowing
as if cast on foreign beach
heat between two star-crossed lovers
touch just slightly out of reach.
Tempt within the dawn is breaking;
in that magic morning light
where God's angels seldom travel,
where lust pleasures may delight.
Sorrowed woes are left behind here
in a swirl of passioned kiss,
running far from silent wanting
to a world of spinning bliss.
Captured in the moment rising
eyes shall meet and lock as one
start nor end within their union
when this blending has begun.
Swept up in true magic moment
bonds release one's past held fears
brushed away are wounds and bruises
as soft kisses wipe life tears.
Within gentle care caressing,
touching lightly shoulder round
dreams are laid and prayers are answered
for heart's search has finally found.
With the tracing of their fingers
firmly placed on bodies flushed
heated breath unwinds and freely
love releases within lust.
Swirling into heated fury
bodies movement rhythm bound
kisses deep drink in the other
senses meshed in love song sound.
Held so close in pressing passion
within pleasured bodies spent
releasing two who have now learned
the making of how love was meant.
In a list
A contest entry
- rhyme by Tangled Angle.
300 points, ended September 15, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very passionate and beautifully written. Such great visuals come out of this write. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing and congrats on the bronze.
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ckwriter69
Thank you so much. I am very pleased for your comment here.
~Pamela 
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What a wonderful journey this takes one on. I have to consur: you are so adept at intimacy and passion. This conveys a real sense of the erotic without being explicit and in such a loving context.
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Dean
Thank you so much. There is no finer twinkle. 
~Pamela
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Congratulations
Congratualtions on your award,
Once again some amazing work I loved my journy through your words, such a great place to be.
Once again congratulations.
Warm thoughts
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Frozentearz
Oh my friend, thank you so much. I have been a discombobulated (he he he) bundle of poetry lately. Getting it out quick enough has been - a challenge. LOL. Thank you for your wonderful words.
~Pamela
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ah this was so beautiful
i think i like this one the most of all that you have written great luck in the contest
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raggyann
Thank you so much for your lovely words. ~Pamela
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some great intimate imagery in this sensual and romantic write...your so good at intimacy and you paint a picture of rapture-excellent piece!
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aliceramone
Thank you so much. There are some subjects the merit intimate words that fill a soul as easily as the act fills the pleasure. I am so very pleased you enjoyed this. Thank you again. ~Pamela
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This is lovely.
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Tangled Angel
Thank you so much for the bronze. It was a pleasure to find your contest in my messages. Thank you. ~Pamela
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