Some say that the stars are just our dreams
That float above the clouds,
Of a love so strong it never breaks,
Never falters or wears down.
And if I searched for all my life
All the world I would survey,
And never found that love again,
I’d be content to stay.
But you, my Love, have found me here,
When I was dark and cold,
And lifted me above the clouds
And made me strong and bold.
I felt you in my heart, a voice
That followed in my dreams,
I turned around and there you were,
Just beneath the seams.
And I just have but this to say:
I’ll love you ‘til I die,
And even when I am no more,
In your dreams, I’ll still fly.
And now that it has been a year,
The brightest star above
Is, and was, and will be you- -
Remember this, my Love.
I’ll love you for forevermore,
When all the world is gone,
And even when the stars go out,
Our love will still go on.
-D.B.
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I'm not as bright as you, my love



I love you




(P.S. this is my 1,000th comment!)

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excellent
Dan, if I didn't know any better, I'd say you're very much in love. Who's the lucky girl, buddy?
Anyway beautiful poem. Magical, mystical, well imaged and everything. Nicely done, son.
Love Brian

