Listen
I Am Rock
There aint a possibility of breakin' me
There is just shaking me
That aint an earthquake
Just me movin'
Fuck you
You thought you could get rid of me
I aint my money
You can have that
I don't give a shit
You disrespected me
That's why I'm rapping about
Jump me
Fuck me up
Take my money
You can serve me
But not hurt me permanently
I've been through worse
But most fights happen
Only one opponent at a time
Get some respect
You coward
Over kill
Just to take me down
Over on Central and Lymon
You waited for my bike to break
When I was trying to fix it
You came from behind my field of vision
Pushed me to the side
Punched me in the back of the head
You couldn't take me alone
Quarters in your fist
Your boy by your side
A knife in his hand
Bubba's bitch
You couldn't figure out
That the Army aint a gang
The shirt I was wearing
"Go-Army.com"
"An Army of One"
My pants were carpenter blue jeans
Do these look like gang clothes to you?
You couldn't leave me alone
Who's laughing now
You got my wallet
And temporary pride
Now I'm pressing charges
I'm taking charge
This is serious business
Aint no one laughing now
Listen
I Am Rock
There aint a possibility of breakin' me
There is just shaking me
That aint an earthquake
Just me movin'
You thought you could get rid of me
I'd tell you to think again
But you never thought at all
Think First Act Later
Author notes
I got mugged and they caught 1/2 people who jumped me, i didn't fight back at the time because they had a knife to my throat, and repeatedly punching the back of my head.
They snuck up on me and punched me in the back of the head and pushed me to the side(as I was fixing my bike) my bike fell into the street they took everything out of my pocket, checked out my ipod and cell phone didn't like them, so they put them back in my pockets and this guy(that stopped because my bike got tossed in front of his car) stopped and watched as I got beat. He called the police and reported it, after wards I was in a daze and crossed the extreamly busy street and passed out by the forest, the man picked me up and put me back on the correct side of the road. The parametics woke me up and I had to relive it several times retelling the story as people asked what happened
At the hospital a states policeman came by and asked if I'd like to press charges, I said yes. After of course they said that they caught one of the guys from the man's description.
List of advantages they had:
Element of Surprise
Outnumbered me
Blindfolded me, so i couldn't see wat was going on
I have a sprained wrist(they stomped on it)
They had multiple weapons (possibly a gun as well)
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tell me if i'm doing something wrong with pressing charges
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, Dear Poet..
but I do have to admit..
I really have a hard time reading lyrics.
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hell yeah.
you go boy. -
sorry to hear about your ordeal... your poem really does speak for itself and state the events that you speak of again in your author's notes... I like the message, it's strong and positive and speaks of strength, but the piece itself seems a bit repetitive...
you state in the piece "that's what I'm rapping about" so perhaps it is meant to be repetitive... I do not have much knowledge of rap and don't feel qualified to judge it...
I thank you for sharing this piece, definitely different from most of the entries I've received... -
wow. Good poem thingy you go there. The rhythm was great, and your short lines where very good too. You kept all the lines short and sweet. lol
It has a very good story though. And I hope you press the hell outta them! Hehe.
Great job!
You got me goin there!
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Legit
Completely good in pressing charges, revenge is always justified (and glorious). But if you know who they are, you should do it yourself. -
kaithleen
i thinks it's great when you say"i'am rock, there aint a posibility of breakin me"
you sound like your really strong hearted and a great poet.
i think it's great that you can say knowbodys gonna break you and you have that believement and encouragement in yourself to believe in that
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